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Age/Gender: 13, Male
Location: Chaos Island, NY
Job: Animator
Heros will be remembered, but Legends will never die. I AM an animator.
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88 Reviews | 17 w/ Responses
That had great graphics. But it was very short. And yes that is a late Halloween but it was good, with a sick twisted ending at the end.
Author's Response:
Thanks man! Yeah, I know it's rather short, but I wanted to submit something! Glad you thought the graphics were good.
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This is not the worst game ever. In fact I say it's a pretty good game. The graphics were OK but the game it self was kind of fun.
A decent game 7/10.
Author's Response:
TY! .. I also think it is a decent game. :)
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Like what the others said, you still need to patch up some stuff. Instead of doing that funky way of walking why doon't you use the manual arrow key codes. What I mean is this:
onClipEvent (load) {
speed = 8;
}
onClipEvent (enterFrame) {
if (Key.isDown(Key.UP)) {
this._y-=speed;
} else if (Key.isDown(Key.DOWN)) {
this._y+=speed;
} else if (Key.isDown(Key.RIGHT)) {
this._x+=speed;
} else if (Key.isDown(Key.LEFT)) {
this._x-=speed;
}
}
Change to the speed for how fast you want it. Also change where the missle comes out meaning insead of having the circle (the "circle is your hittest you find it by pressing Q) in the middle so it looks like the missle is coming out of his body. You should have it at the edge of the gun.
Oh yeah, fix up the menu! Lolz.
Unfornatly you don't have this flash file but at least for future games you can use this :).
Author's Response:
With that code, the aiming would suck. With that code you can aim only eight directions, with mine you can aim unlimited directions. I had a ton of errors. Such as the gun thing, the bad menu, all of that fun stuff. My next works, will have nice menus. I promise!
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When you draw every thing a a new blank keyframe....
Your 5 attempt? Work harder on your flashes...Not just one night.
Author's Response:
Lol. Was not my 5th attempt. Just said that so it wouldn't get blammed (even though it's clock day) I know when people say "My first attempt..." Its an automatic blam unless they are a flash god.
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I love the animtion and how smooth the 3D is!
Author's Response:
thanks! another flash is coming.
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All you need to do to make this movie perfect is add the lip-syncing.
The graphics were good though.
The animation...Well there wasn't a lot.
If you just improved the lip-syncing then you would got an higher score :).
Author's Response:
Considering weebl and bob don't have any moving lips and they get a high score I don't think that Lip sync is what I need the most, maybe I need to be less random, or something. Still this is not bad, it got onto newgrounds and I made this whole flash in one hour this morning. The last episode took me a week to make, hows that for improvement, might make another soon.
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This was a good movie, It has a nice touch to it.
I liked how you didn't add music and just put in sound, that was pretty cool. The explosions were nicely animated. Although it wasn't all FBF.
If you want to make it ALL frame by frame all you have to do is make the non-Movie clip guys a Movie clip and then make a blank Keyframe (F7) and redrawn him. That makes it "look" FBF.
Author's Response:
Thanx for the tip. But actually the only thing that was tweened was the square that showed up after the explosion. Also TY for showing the effort to write a review.
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I can tell your going to get reviews like I DON'T WANNA LEARN and stuff like that. Ignore them.
Anyways back to the flash.
I can tell that you have fairly good graphics and that you have a nice style too. Maybe you should make a movie that isn't about learning..But never the less this was a good flash movie.
Author's Response:
I posted it was a work I made time ago, and felt like uploading to the site.
Don't worry I have great stuff working on. Also educational stuff isn't bet my style lol
Thanks for reviewing
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I really like this game (finally a Wiggi World game that IS enjoyable). I also you notice if you click on all of them my browser force quits...Then again it prombley is my computer...lolz.
Good luck!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I haven't experienced a problem correlating people clicking and the browser closing, though. Good luck with that :)
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You should make it more interactive like make it so you can JUMP or ATTACK. Moving left to left isn't exactly fun...
This is more like a puzzle game but with inventory stuff a little confusing... And since there is only one path it makes the game (well for me then again I have a low attention spam) kind of dull..
Next try to add a jump button instead of left-right.
Author's Response:
Ok, I thought about making jump from the start, I made it and there wasn't any room to jump in the maze... So I don't really see the point. And its a kids game for Wiggi World (5-12), I don't think they would be happy with attacking in the game.
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