Score: 7

"This was a good sprite movie"

submission: Mario in Toruble

date: August 8, 2007

This was a pretty decent sprite movie. I liked how you made it so you combined the sprite and your drawings...And the star part was pretty cool too.

I can tell that your a pretty good sprite animator.

But what you might want to edit on your next film is gravity...Mario seemed to slow down at the star part...What you want to do is not make it so noticeable at the beggining so it makes sence.

Score: 6

"It would be great if you FINISHED it..."

submission: Funny Short(updated)

date: August 8, 2007

The graphics animation basically everything is GREAT...So why is it a 6/10 cause it seems like you just submitted it WHEN IT WAS NOT DONE. Please submit it when it is done...

This might pass through the portal because of the GREAT graphics and animation but finish all the shorts, and it get a great score :).

(I would give a 9/10 if you finished it).

Score: 8

"hmmm..."

submission: Code:R.E.D. Episode 1

date: August 8, 2007

Is the beginning part going to be the intro for your movie? Cause at first it sounded like a music video but then you had that short at the end...

Anyways back to reviewing...

Your style is great...and same goes for your graphics...The only thing thats weird is that the actual movie...Is it a music video or is it a start to a movie? Either way its great...

In the beginning of the "start of the movie" there was no background...I hope its not going to be like that throughout the whole video.

Good luck with your series!

Score: 6

"This will prombley get passed the portal..."

submission: G-A-G Spriting Tutorial

date: August 8, 2007

Its a nice tut...But the only problem I have is that its been done before...But it was a good tut never the less...

You could explained more on WHY and WHERE would you use sprites...And say whats a good sprite movie and what's a bad sprite movie...

Other then that it was good.

Score: 7

"This was great for a first flash!"

submission: A Man and His Butterfly

date: August 8, 2007

This was good! Why did it get such a low score? (for the reviews) Oh well ignore them...This was a great flash for a beginners.

Need to work on...well nothing really I don't want to be harsh on you since this IS your first flash...maybe FBF animation? Not all of it FBF just maybe his mouth and stuff...

Well good luck with your other movie :).

Score: 6

"Ha I saw this on my psp!"

submission: BBQ Talks Dog Breeds

date: July 29, 2007

This was an alright movie...Its kind of funny and maybe my computer but it gets REALLY LOUD sometimes lol.

Out of sync is no biggie it was annoying sometimes but maybe if you try making it a MC (put your sound in a movie clip).

For example lets say you have a person saying "I love you" you put that in a movie clip (name it I love you) of course and then you have a sound saying I hate you put that in a DIFFERENT movie clip...

Hope this helps!

Score: 8

"This one was ok..."

submission: Lil' Bush Soundboard

date: July 28, 2007

This one was fine, I agree with Waitin-4-Waves , you did this way to early but I think this deserves an overal 6/10.

I am giving you an 8 to help you out :).

Have a cool backround, also don't make your words sand make it more like typewriter. And do more then one charictor.

good luck :).

Score: 8

"Its great but..."

submission: A PlatForm Tutorial

date: July 28, 2007

I am having a problem (I also wrote it in forms) the enemy is not attacking PLEASE ANSWER! I have been try fix this for a while whats wrong with it? (the enemy not dieing...) And yes I did the box thing here is the file <a href="http://denvish.net/ulf/280707/3030_Game_">http://denvish.net/ulf/280707/3030_Ga me_</a>
rpg.php.

Score: 8

"This is a great game"

submission: Orbular

date: July 25, 2007

this is a great game I am looking foward to your other games.

Score: 0

"How long did this take..."

submission: Hipkid's Apocolypse

date: July 13, 2007

Wow... That was a pretty messed up movie. I really don't know how it can take that many people to make such a crappy movie. There wasn't even a story line behind what he was doing, and couldn't you draw the people's faces instead of finding pictures off of the internet? Seriously you NEED to improve.

-GOD